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Celestial Griimph Form wip 1

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Celestial form of my griimph species wip 1

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I think its time for my first Critique ever on deviant art^^.
My english is not the best but i rly wanted to try it.
So lets start with the Originality.
I think the way she looks like atm is very special.
Special the combination of leaf with her fur is is good implement in this sketch. The antlers and the wings are also interesting in my opinion. I am rly interestet what sort of Tail you will give her in the Finished version.
So 5 from 5 Stars on Originality.
Let's go on with the Vision.
For that i just count her front part becaus its still a wip and the back part is rly only a sketch atm.
But what i can say is that i like what i see.
The fur at her chest and the ears looks awesome even if its not finished ^^.
And i also like her haircut/the leafs in her face becaus it harmonized good with the expresion in her face.
All in all i think she is very adorable.
Now to the Technique.
Personally i cant say much about technique but for me as a layman it looks very professionell. I dont know what you can do wrong apart from a draw error in this stadium but i still think your technique is nice.
I am sorry that i can't say much about the anatomy becaus i am not a person who looks so closely to every detail but i think it doesend rly matter becaus like you sayed. Your created this species so its your choice what anatomy she has.
I am also kinda sorry that i cant give you negative critique to help you with improve your skill but in my eyes she just looks Awesome even with a closely look.
So now to the last Point in this critique.
The Impact.
For that i just need to look her in the eyes >///<
i think for me is the most importand thing on a Picture like that how she/he looks like becaus if the eyes are good drawn it feels like she is rly alive.
In this image its not that extrem but i dont count it as a finished Picture becaus its a wip.
But it definite got a good Impact so 4,5 on that.
I am not sure if its the direction she looks like or what ever.
But it dont give me a feeling like,
Yea, THATS it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>.
Its very close to it but not perfect.

I hope my Critique is ok for you.
Sincerely yours
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